Vietnam · Creator CÔ GIÁO TÓC DÀI99：Reply to phuong duong's comment: This pen has a tiny nib, very easy to write with.TikTok product video breakdown

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Replying to phuong duong’s comment, the creator focuses on the gel pen’s tiny nib and describes how easy it is to write with.

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Script timeline

1. 0:00
   Product Selling Points

   Teacher, everyone says this pen with a tiny nib is super easy to write with. Exactly, the nib of this pen is extremely small, look, its tip is shaped like a diamond, it is incredibly tiny, just like a needle head. Now I'll write it for you to see, it's just this small.

2. 0:20
   Product Benefits

   Besides, it can be erased directly, once wiped it becomes completely spotless without any trace, the erased handwriting is as neat as printed. Everyone says you get what you pay for, this is the Gstar 0.3 pen, with 0.5mm nib specification.

3. 0:35
   Product Comparison

   One box contains 12 pens, with two colors blue and purple, I'll show you the writing effect of the purple one, it won't smudge at all after erasing. I'll erase it for you, it gets wiped completely clean. However, if you choose the 0.3 model, it is recommended to pick the blue one, its writing color is bright and beautiful, the purple one won't look that vivid.

4. 1:05
   Instructions for Use

   You need to use this pen carefully, don't drop it on the ground, or the nib will get damaged easily. Don't shake the pen violently while writing, otherwise the ink will flow backward into the pen barrel. When you flip it to erase the handwriting later, the ink will flow out from the tiny hole on the nib and smudge the paper. This pen is very cheap, a box of 12 pens only costs tens of thousands Vietnamese dong. If you want to buy it for your kids, you can place an order on my TikTok homepage.

Storyboard breakdown

0:00–0:20

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The female teacher holds the erasable pen, shows its tiny nib to the camera, then demonstrates writing on the grid paper of the notebook, clearly presenting the smooth writing effect.

0:20–0:35

Close-up

The female teacher flips the pen, uses the eraser on its tail to rub the just-written words, and completely erases the handwriting, showing the residue-free erasing effect throughout the process.

0:35–1:05

Close-up

The female teacher takes out all the remaining erasable pens from the pen box and places them on the notebook, showing two colors of blue and purple, then writes purple marks and erases them respectively, introducing the difference in usage effect between the two colors.

1:05–1:39

Close-up

The female teacher holds all the pens in her hand, demonstrates that the wrong shaking action of the pen will cause the ink to flow back and damage the nib, explains the correct usage and the low price of the pens, and guides the audience to her TikTok homepage to place an order.